Project 1 update 3

Updated story:

Two friends each at their own home, unable to see each other but keep in contact with paper planes. Both really eager for freedom and to explore the world. The friend passed away, since they like crafting very much. The protagonist makes a paper bird in memory of his friend, before he goes to sleep, tears fall onto the bird. The bird comes to life and flies out the same way. But this time it lands on a branch, right beside a blue bird, with a red scarf around his neck, it's the same scarf his friend wore before.

I've encountered some issues, some with fixes, some not yet

• Film location

• Show what illness they have, what illness they have? Cancer?

• Blue symbolizes freedom, what color should the other bird be? Green?

• Do we see the words on the paper plane mail exchange? What's on it?

• Film and take frames out? Or pictures

• How to show they want freedom other than words on the mail (important)

• How does he know his friend is dead

  • White paper plane turns red

Plans: Getting camera setup on Monday and experimenting shots on Tuesday

Finish All filming on Friday

This is the style I'm looking to go for, film would start out black and white all the way until the very end with the two birds meeting, when it slowly turns to final image with color